Write At You...

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Write At You...

hey baby…
i’m here just behind your ear
my whispering heat, your dare

”…come to me…” you said

and i learned the universe
just so i could.
don’t turn your head
I AM right behind
i’m the tickle that you feel
in the back of your mind
my hands message your spine
and i’m coming around
my scent locks your legs
and apart on the ground
sensual sends to your knees
the breeze .freeze. and glance down
passionate eyes become wet sound…
the ghosts of listening lips surround
your body at the hips and burns
...i can feel you hear
sweet on my tongue.
the taste of us is
a drop of my pen
hard at attention
our bodies motion
pulsing with ache
i write to a vision
can you feel…
we’re about submission.
darling. ;)~ hard
on target
and charming
teasing at your skin
i’m nibbling
pleasing with a grin
i’m licking
and lookin’…
Write At You.

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ForeverPoet commented on Write At You...

05-10-2010

oh my my my. again, you have "tickled my spine, made me shiver, and want to lick the ink!!!!!! Izzy-Izzy-Izzy............

IzzyGumbo

05/12/2010

well I'm so glad you enjoyed :))

soulwriter commented on Write At You...

11-23-2009

You had me at the title, and then you teased and pleased... I really like your word sizzling as you write! 10 from me

IzzyGumbo

11/23/2009

Thanks soulwriter! I appreciate your read and that you think it sizzles, that makes me smile!

RJK commented on Write At You...

11-23-2009

I need a smoke and i don't smoke. That was a dreamy way of putting it.

IzzyGumbo

11/23/2009

lol!!! I'm so glad that worked for you ;)

ginga commented on Write At You...

11-21-2009

Izzy, Your poetic charm shines through here and I love the stylistic devices you have engaged resulting in a very modern and slap-the-make-on-them piece. (Also I love that you have a pic now that shows the lovely face that those eyes accent! :) ginga

IzzyGumbo

11/21/2009

Thanks so much ginga! Glad you enjoyed, it's a poem about 'writing'. ;)

poetheart87 commented on Write At You...

11-18-2009

Fantastic. It's very arousing, and showing. This is great.

IzzyGumbo

11/22/2009

thank you so much Poetheart :) I appreciate your reading time and kind comment. :)

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