Wrong Door

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  • Confusion

    Wrong Door

    What door is to be open
    Which one of these doors are the one
    what door leads to the right path
    why am I so frighten
    If I go in, will I be gone
    did I do the right math

    As I choose the Wrong door
    my life now is on the floor
    the juice my elders gave me are now in use
    the words of the righteous are passing by
    As I walk through the night, i cry
    Why did I pick that door
    I see drugs and alcohol
    I hear many bloody waterfalls
    My chance in life has come to an end
    now I see and hear the advices of my friends and elders

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    MarionYost commented on Wrong Door

    02-20-2010

    This is good, we've ALL been through the confusion, I love your vocabulary in this one My favorite line is "Why did I pick that door I see drugs and alcohol I hear many bloody waterfalls My chance in life has come to an end." Yes, we all have different "vises" But. We've all had that struggle. Nicely done! All the best -Marion-

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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