YESTERDAYS

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    YESTERDAYS





    YESTERDAY WHEN I WAS YOUNG
    WE RAN AND PLAYED
    CLIMBED TREES
    NOTHING MATTERED
    JUST THE AIR THAT WE BREATHE

    TIMED SPENT, YEARS PASSED
    THOSE WERE YESTERDAY
    AS WILL BE TOMORROW
    A YESTERDAY
    WHO WILL REMEMBER
    HERE TO DAY GONE TOMORROW
    WILL I REMEMBER
    YESTERDAYS SORROW?????

    i WILL REMEMBER AS IF IT WERE TODAY
    TEAR WILL FALL AS YESTERDAYS RAIN

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    MrGee commented on YESTERDAYS

    11-24-2009

    VERY NICE. The poem has very good meter and picks a good picture in the readers mind. however, I think the final line wud read better if it said: Tears will fall as yesterday's rain. This poem also reminded me of a song sung by Al Clark - Yesterday when I was Young. now to the rating having considering this carefully, I rate this work a 10
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    gogant commented on YESTERDAYS

    11-23-2009

    We've used our youth as a magic wand...oh, what things we did and dreamed...some were sad, but we were glad we had them. A quaint little poem, Lydia. gogant
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    confidence17 commented on YESTERDAYS

    11-23-2009

    What is your problem with capital letters?? I like your poems, but if you want to be taken seriously, you should turn off the caps lock.
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    Lydia

    11/23/2009

    what it matter if it caps or not who are you to say how one can type. don't like it don't read it I will make it as I please.what is your problem complaining. what does it matter any ways you have a problem with caps

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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