You and Me

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This was written about my first girlfriend that I had from my Freshman year to summer of my Sophomore year when she broke up with me. Now going into my Senior year I look back and realize she was and is the most amazing girl I had met. I just wish that she would want to be together again as much as I do. I hope you read this my dear. I miss you <3

You and Me

,and page after page
reading those lines
with your handwriting engraved inside of my mind
telling stories of memories we had together, and
the promises we made of staying together, forever    
The laughs and the smiles
that always lit up our faces
were also in company with some frowns and dark places, and
when the silence was deafening
those moments said everything, that we couldn't say     
Honestly I miss those days
Where the only thing that made me smile was seeing your face, and
how we always knew how the other felt underneath all the pain
Honestly I miss how you make me feel like singing out loud
When the smell of your perfume put my head in the clouds, and
though it’s not about our feelings, girl, you know they have there place, and
Honestly I miss how it used to be
When it was You and Me

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on You and Me

08-17-2011

I think this is a very original poem full of love and loss. It is funny the things that we remember:)

poetlyrics33

08/21/2011

It is! I miss her a lot...

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

poetlyrics33’s Poems (31)

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You and Me 1
No Key 0
Sorry Sinking Soul. 1
A Heart on the Outside. 1
Easy As Pride. 1
Here it is, Don't make me regret it. 0
I'm not insane... Yes you are. 0
Wont Stop (Pt. 2) 0
Wont Stop 0
Ever green, Never To Be. 0
SHE. 0
You Can't. 0
An Anxious Castaway 0
An Infamous Memory. 1
Surreal Reality. 1
Can't Stand. 0
Can't Find My Mind 2
Just... Justified 1
Thy self be hidden. 0
Amy. 1
Embracing Letting Go. 2
Sleep. 2
I've Arrived. 1
Deceiving love charmer. 2
Finding What Matters 0
Forget it. 1
Today there is a regret. 0
Door. 0
I'll Use Hope, To Cope 0
Saved. 3
Even In The Night 1