You Are Love

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You Are Love

You are love

You are my creator King

I failed you Lord yet you lift me up

I bow down before my creator King

You know the deepest me yet you love me like a deepest sea

The waves are hard

The wind is cold yet you embrace me because

You are LOVE!

 

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Shang commented on You Are Love

07-25-2010

Thanks for the comment and thanks for the encouragement...I should write more:)

ccslim commented on You Are Love

08-12-2009

Great Write!!! This has super content with the flow of sound up high. I do think if you kept this high through out with aka "king" sound you could add a bit more!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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