You are the maker of who I am

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You are the maker of who I am

You make me feel brilliant

You make me feel inspired

You make me feel so encouraged.

 

When I am around you

You bring me nothing but laughter and joy.

 

However when we are far apart

I start to feel hopeless.

 

But always pull me aside and you let me know that I’m attractive.

You let me know that I can be anything that I want be.

 

You let me know things that I never thought of before

And you also make me feel ways that I never felt before.

 

You and I

We laugh together

We even pray together

You and I share tears together

 

You tell me that I am someone

You told me that I am someone that will soon become somebody

 

You let me know that you are here for me

And forever we will always defend each other.

 

You are the maker of who I am.

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IzzyGumbo commented on You are the maker of who I am

10-11-2009

Well done Poet, this is well written and very inspirational. I'll be reading more :)

almonord1990

10/11/2009

THANK YOU FRIEND

Charlie23 commented on You are the maker of who I am

10-10-2009

This is very well written, almonord! I find it spiritual and inspirational!

Starhawk commented on You are the maker of who I am

10-06-2009

It's always good to have at least one close friend. keep writing.

almonord1990

10/06/2009

thank you

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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almonord1990’s Poems (28)

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3 Times her size 5
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Meeting a girl’s father 2
I am so in love with you 1
Drifting 1
Don't forget about the love 2
Preparing me 1
Our hearts beat as one 1
I wear the pants in this relationship 2
I can feel it in the wind. 3
You are the maker of who I am 3
I have to be real 1
I will 2
CHANGING MY LIFE 4
Mother Set Me Free 3
HIGHER 4
SHINE 6
STEP BY STEP 2
LOVE KILLS 2
Father and son 2
Tragedy 4
your past 3
the fight 3
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Using You 7
The Strangest Feelings 6
My Type Of Women 7