You Care About Me Don’t You?

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    You Care About Me Don’t You?

    You care about me don’t you?
    I can see it in everything you do.
    Your emotions are suspicious,
    but don’t know what happening between us.

    You are suspicious and don’t recognize it,
    I’m telling you, other people can see it,
    so whatever I say please don’t make me repeat,
    I’m not only tired, but I’m sick of it.

    Why when I speak about how it is in reality
    you cried and walk away suddenly.
    Let me tell you how it is, you was on my mind,
    that is what happened, so understand me please.

    Referring to the questions you had asked me,
    I would answer you as honest as i can be,
    now it is your turn to listen to me,
    please don’t walk away as I speak suddenly!
    I got feelings too and your emotions can hurt me, possibly.

    Let me start by saying “although it never happened to me
    the way i wanted it to be, temptation rises,
    I guest by now you think I’m crazy,
    but I’m not, this is just reality and things happen,
    I just want you to know I got my life to live,
    So when everything is in the open,
    and God revealed, automatically I would believe.

    So as a daring heart, understand me please;
    Although we seems to be very close friends,
    don’t get to far with your emotions.
    Don’t get me wrong, that I’m being rude to you,
    Just letting you know that is how I do.

    Well, we all got opinions to everything,
    That’s true because we all are human beings.
    In this world we are not perfect or fit,
    atleast to everything we seek,
    so understand me please, when it comes to our lives on earth,
    Here, we all makes mistakes and that don’t means we all are dirt.

    Truly, truly, truly respect is adore,
    even so, please, please, don’t let that emotions show,
    You care about me and that is what I do know.”

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    Tempy commented on You Care About Me Don’t You?

    08-08-2009

    with words like this, i'd walk out the door, so please please please, lock the door after I leave, I don't want anything of mine if i left it behind to you i'd say goodbye. cos friends don't make the people around them feel bad for being real or having thoughts that don't match yours. worst of all a friend doesn't tell you when you can talk and what you cannot say. I think your thoughts are selfish and please please please if i knock don't answer cos I don't care anymore. thats what this poem gets me thinking or going.

    Buzzyboy

    02/27/2018

    thanks for your insight

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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