you do not know me

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  • Death
    • selena
    • is trying not to drown in her own sorrow

    Poem Commentary

    i wrote this when i was kinda upset at alot of things

    you do not know me

    You Do Not Know Me
    I move upon you ever so silent,
    looking like that which is my enemy.
    You are my family,my lover,my friend,the stranger
    I meet,yet you do not know me.
    In your eyes I am mortal,not seeing the
    beast that is encased within this mortal shell.
    I pass you on the street,as you smile and say hello,
    I nod my head in great disguise as I watch you go.
    I dress and act like you even do the things you do,
    Yet you do not know me.
    I smile as I secretly see your death,
    for centuries of sins against me.
    By many names you've called me by,
    but only one when you must die.
    Many times I've walked this land
    to bring you to your knees,
    Death,chaos, disasters and plague's
    for they are your disease.
    I walk among you this you can be sure,
    And Armageddon is my gift to you to which
    there is no cure.

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    eddie14 commented on you do not know me

    04-21-2010

    WOW wonderfullly writen I 1der who your talking about LOL? Just kidding I know and that is so cool that you wrote like that so true as well great writing hes comming soon

    DeepEclipse commented on you do not know me

    09-23-2009

    Dark. I wonder exactly who it is you are describing......The first thought was Satan.....or maybe pain itself. A mysterious poem that doesnt' give itself away and lets teh readers imagination wander.......

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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