You Have Entered


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  • Life

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    Last night, I had someone I've loved for a long time decide to give me a chance at love with him and I am so happy(:

    You Have Entered

    It was that night when it began
    It was almost more than my heart could stand
    Just one evening with you
    Now it's more that i can do
    To keep my heart from falling hard and fast
    Just like all the times in the past
    But i'm afraid my heart have already begun to fall
    I've done my best, but i can no longer stall
    It's now a fixation
    a longing, an urge, a temptation
    Now i need you in my life'
    you can cure all the sadness and strife
    With just one word, one sentence
    You have magically gained admittance
    You have entered the jungle on my heart
    Now you and i shall never part
    Side by side, together each day
    You have entered my heart and you're here to stay.

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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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