You Killed Her

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    • Wasn't it beautiful running wild 'till you fell asleep? 'Till the monsters caught up to you

    You Killed Her

     The gun lays there now.
    With her blood dripping out of it.
    This life yeah it killed her.
    You broke her.
    She lays there now in her own blood.
    Her warm blood.
    You never did anything to save her.
    You just broke her down more.Causing her to pick up the gun.
    She knew this was the easy way out.
    This was her last breath.
    And this was your final chance to save her.
    You let it slip through your hands like sand.
    She took your abuse.
    Blaming herself for all of it but knowing in her heart it truely was yours.
    She's free now.
    You can't make her bleed anymore.
    You can't bruise her.
    She an Angel.
    But this guilt will haunt you forever.
    May you suffer in hell.

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    CherokeePrinces commented on You Killed Her

    09-04-2009

    Nicely done. Yes it is gloomy, yes it is sad but it shows that you actually give a damn. Very well done.
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    SweetBlood

    09/04/2009

    hehe Thank you sooo much!!!

    NitaBoo commented on You Killed Her

    07-03-2009

    This was dark...nice work but very gloomy....I agree with CongoNetherland....negativity takes so much energy and depression is indeed a luxury...climb out the ditch and get back on track....
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    CongoNetherland commented on You Killed Her

    06-17-2009

    Much better format and spelling. Well done! But the topic is, well, um . . . uh . . maybe grim and gloomy are too . . . uh optimistic? I know life often sucks big time. But it's worth the ride. At your speed, there is a lot of good stuff ahead, I promise. I know. I had been in a hospital for depression twenty year ago and have battled it off and on all my life. But, when I was in the hospital I met people with real problems. It made me realize my own thoughts of death were stupid compared with their pain. You know who never kills themselves? People in the poorest countries. They have almost zero suicide rates. They don't have time to dwell on dying, because they only have time to live. It is a luxury to be depressed. I call it binging on doom berries. Help someone. You have have so much more power than most, just being who you are and where you are from. Sorry for the sermon, but I know this. I wish you the best. I ain't religious, but I have convictions. This poem has a lot of anger. Frankly, it will be a waste of energy. You will only hurt the people who love you; everyone else won't care. You will miss your targets. Surviving is a better strategy with better results. And more fun.
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    vincenzo commented on You Killed Her

    06-17-2009

    good philosophy. i like the fact that nemesis awaits the transgressor in hell
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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