You Make Me Feel

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Baby, You... You make me feel. For once in my life I'm no longer numb... I love you, Jacob

You Make Me Feel

You,
You make me feel,
You make me feel like I can breathe.
It's like the air I'm breathing in is no longer suffocating me,
It's like you're reviving me, breathing new life into me.
You,
You make me feel,
You make me feel like age doesn't matter.
It's like being 13 and still allowed to be madly in love,
It's like this love will be true and fair even when we are 90 years old.
You,
You make me feel,
You make me feel like a million bucks.
It's like I'm your rarest and most prized diamond,
It's like I'm floating in wealthy love.
You,
You make me feel,
You make me feel like I can fly.
It's like the butterflies in my tummy lift me to the sky,
It's like falling and finally having wings to catch me.
You,
You make me feel,
You make me feel like brilliant innocence.
It's like knowing even after the past I can still wear white,
It's like having pure love in my heart, no longer stained black.
You,
You make me feel,
You make me feel like a little kid.
It's like a freedom and invincibility so child-like,
It's like the first day of kindergarten saying "I wanna share my crayons with you!"
You,
You make me feel,
You make me feel like I'm in a state of euphoria.
It's like having beauty all around, never an ounce of society's ugliness,
It's like...

Perfection.

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Ninjaboy commented on You Make Me Feel

09-01-2011

i love this baby! its wonderful! =D i love you so much! keep up the good work my darling =)

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