You Need To Notice


  • Anger

    You Need To Notice

    Apparently I'm lying
    when i say im trying
    I'm not perfect enough for my dad
    That makes me so damn mad
    That's why i sleep all day
    because we got nothing nice to say
    and I'm sick of it
    you say all i do is bitch
    well all you do is complain
    you and i aren't the same
    we no longer see eye to eye
    and now all i do is secretly cry
    you no longer understand me
    no your right, I'm not the best i can be
    but im only 15
    let me make my mistakes
    if that's what it takes
    but dont make me feel like shit
    by making a whole list
    of what you think I'm doing wrong
    maybe that makes you feel strong
    but to me it hurts
    makes me feel like dirt
    so when i say I'm trying
    stop saying im lying
    try to open your eyes
    notice and recognize
    is it so hard to believe
    damn it just let me be me

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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