You promised (for Jordan G.)


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    You promised (for Jordan G.)

    You wake up everyday
    Half asleep
    Half in dismay
    You can't stand the pain
    Nothing helps

    You wonder how could this happen to me
    Where could I have gone so wrong
    You look at your day
    And wish it was your last

    You tell your friends
    You hate your life
    You make them cry
    When you want to die

    I feel so responsible
    I led you there
    If only I knew how to help
    maybe I couldve saved you
    If only you didnt have to try and die that night

    This world wasnt made for you
    You think no one cares
    You say its cruel
    That its no fair

    Jordan please
    Dont give up just yet
    Let me lend you a hand
    And please dont forget
    Your never alone
    In this hateful land

    I'll catch your tears
    as they drop
    I'll hug you tight
    and tell you to fight

    The night you told me..
    you were ready to die
    I never cried so hard in my life
    I took a knife
    and was ready to die with you

    You can't stand it no more
    Your crying
    Telling me you can't go on
    Im crying trying to help

    In a split second the line goes blank
    Im crying more than you could think
    Im screaming your name
    Im praying to god
    Hoping your okay.

    Im at your grave
    It's 2006
    It says loved son and loved friend
    I wonder everyday if I couldve saved you

    My life isn't the same
    I still remember you
    I always will
    I cry everyday
    its been a few years

    You meant everything to me
    You were my dearest friend..
    why'd you leave me..
    you promised...

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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    DarkPoet17’s Poems (17)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    To whom it concerns 1
    Hoping he would see 3
    I just couldn't believe 2
    Please let me be free 1
    You'll never change 2
    Look in my eyes 1
    You promised (for Jordan G.) 0
    Be who you are 0
    All alone to cry 2
    A birthday tragedy 2
    I miss what we use to be 2
    Why didn't you want me? 1
    Why couldn't I just tell him? 1
    Goodbye dear friend For now it is hello 1
    Get what i'm talking about yet? 2
    The Memories you kept 2
    When your love turns into hate 2