You Said

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    You Said

    All the words that you said

    Went straight to my head

    So I don’t know how you feel

    I just know that it’s real to me

    That’s where we left it

     

    I’m going through the days

    Trying new ways

    Will you notice

    I’m just going through the motions

    Of today

     

    You told me

     The way that you felt

    Now it’s too late

    I’m having trouble

     Breathing  and

    I won’t believe that you didn’t mean it

    You didn’t mean it

     

    Is this one sided

    Cause that’s what it feels like

    I don’t know where this came from

    All I know are the things that I want

    What I know we could be


    Tell me when I can come back around

    Every time you look at me

    It’s like I’ll break if it’s for too long

    For something that fits just right

    Why does it feel so wrong?

     

    You told me

    The way that you felt

    Now it’s too late

    We’ve come so far

    There’s no returning and

    I won’t believe that you didn’t feel it

    You didn’t feel it

     

    Tell me you don’t feel a thing

    You didn’t mean a word you said

    I’ll turn away and let you be

    Tell me you don’t feel a thing

    You didn’t mean a word you said

    I’ll turn away let you ignore it

     

    But you told m e

    The way that you felt

    Now it’s too late

    And I’m having trouble

    Believing

    I won’t believe that you didn’t mean it

    Because the words that you said

    Went straight to my head

    You didn’t mean it

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    am2anangel commented on You Said

    10-31-2011

    excellent write full of passion and a sense of longing. well done. -Tonya

    Musicmaker43

    11/01/2011

    Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed reading it.

    guardianangel76 commented on You Said

    10-21-2011

    love this one with all my heart...saving it in my favorites...;-0

    Musicmaker43

    11/01/2011

    Thanks! That means a lot to me:)

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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