You see today...

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    • JonTalbain
    • Didn't I tell you, what I believe... Did somebody say that....that love like that won't last? Didn't I give you all that I got to, give baby?

    You see today...

    Today, I found my happiness
    Peace and love that could quell the turbulent soul
    The honor of having you by my side
    It forever extends throughout my being, both fleshly and cosmic
    Happily ever after has meaning once again
    With you by my side, I am so strong
    For my love, for you, nothing is truly impossible
    You see today, I found my future in you

    Many nights we’ve talked
    And so many days that we’ve been away, I’ve longed to take you into my arms
    For this choice that I’ve made, I know that it is the righteous one to
    Make for us both
    Never did I think I would be this madly in love
    And every word exchanged, I hope that it draws us closer
    I want to immerse myself in you, be able to drown in your affection
    I’ve held you close to my heart, and never once did I dare to let go
    To fight so many battles, a veteran already in life’s unyielding war
    I look forward to coming home to you
    I dared to look ahead into my future
    And boldly shut the door to my past
    You see… today, I found my love of a lifetime.

    With each hour, I see myself being your protection, your friend and confidante
    Nothing you cannot say will sway what I feel
    We’re more than just Bonnie and Clyde;
    It’s us against the world, and I am so determined to keep us strong
    I know we will succeed in all that we touch
    Long as we remain true to each other, our union shall be so rewarding and fruitful
    I envision us at night,
    You, a doting mother
    And I... I am the dutiful father, so happy to have been giving such wonderful gifts
    You see today… I admit to you, that I am yours for all time

    Today, you are my wife who I didn’t marry yet
    Today, you are mother of my children, which are yet to be born
    In this hour, you’re the one who I want to be with for all my days
    With this minute, I acknowledge that we are different, but the same
    I’ve stop having to look for what I longed for,
    Because my dear, you see today…I wanna make you my wife
    And I wanna spend all of my life with you.

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    bforibus commented on You see today...

    06-22-2009

    i do love the emotions and colors in this poem. the metaphors where great. it was very intelligently made. i tend to say with a poem like this, which has a familiar theme, that it needs to have a melody to seperate itself from the other poems like this but it was great just the way it is. good job

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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