You Treat Me

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You Treat Me


Dedication to "a man", that hasn't learned...

 

Tears continue to escape, emotions raging 
high and low. On my face I will fake a 
smile, just for show. It's hard to deny
that every time I try, how easy I can cry.
I've told you once, I've told you twice.
You don't treat me very nice. If I am the 
one you say you love, why do you continue
to shove. 

When you took me for your Wife, you should
of made me #1 in your life. Instead you cut
my heart with a knife.
The words you say don't mean a thing, your
actions are what STING.

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CMarsh commented on You Treat Me

08-26-2009

This may sound a little strange,but if cloning was legal I would want some like you to be the first. We need more people with your heart and soul and this world wold be a better place. If there's a man in your life he should know how lucky he is to have someone like you.I agree with Lithiumblack awesome poem and easy 10

sandyb

08/26/2009

Thank you very much. You made me smile.

lithiumblack commented on You Treat Me

08-10-2009

Some people don't have the capacity for introspection, or maturity. They wander through life with a false sense of entitlement, gleefully crushing everything and everyone in their path beneath a proverbial boot heel. You show great courage and forethought by recognizing that sometimes it takes swallowing our pride to lessen the damage without ever compromising our integrity. Great piece, Sandy. An easy 10, though I wish I could give it a higher score.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

sandyb’s Poems (130)

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Unchanged Routine 1
Only When I'm Alone 2
Harsh Reality of Love Denied 1
Searching For My Someday 6
Like Me 1
Going Under 2
A Fools Tool 6
Just Another Day 9
A Redo 3
Let It Go 2
Missed Chances 3
These Questions 1
You Remind Me 1
Whispers In The Wind 4
Treasured Beauty 1
Only In My Dreams 4
My Complaint, My Fault 2
Masked Man 0
Open Your Heart and Let Love In 4
What Ifs 7
Out of the Blue 3
Love's Chore 4
The one I once adored, I now despise. 4
Quenching Desire 6
Breathing Space 5
HARD TO SAY GOOD-BYE 5
VOWS OF DELUSION 2
Home Invader 6
WHAT'S LEFT OF ME 2
Offender of Love 3
Get a job 4
Tips for the Road 2
Devine Loss 2
I Cannot, Sleep, Eat, or Think 2
Appreciate 1
Hearts Token 1
My Pride 1
Something's going on 0
Tale of Romance 1
This Moment 1
Time Passes By 2
To See Me 1
You Treat Me 0
Your Buddies, Your Pals 1
Your Love 2
I can only wonder 0
The Mistake 1
This Thing Called Love 1
Your Memory 0
Give it back 0
No Explanation 0
SITUATION 1
ALWAYS THINKING 1
LET'S 1
LISTEN 3
Love Out-Grown 0
My Children 0
Should I 0
Some Kind of Trip 1
Thoughts of you 0
Without a thought 0
In The Mirror 1
What A SPORT 0
She is loved, yet unknown 0
DAUGHTER 1
WHEN I LEAVE YOU 1
Rush of Emotions 0
My Office 2
Way Deep Down Inside 0
Battle with Breath 0
Your Special Love 0
I MISS YOU... 0
A PERSONAL PRAYOR 0
FROM ABOVE 0
IF YOU LOVE ME... 0
Little girl in such a hurry 0
Silent Romance 2
Our Time 0
My Self Worth 1
My Guard Down 0
Listen to no voice 0
Example 0
HOLDING ON 1
MENDED HEART 0
What is Family for 1
Unforgettable Love 0
I Am Bitter 1
My Friends 1
Our Bond 1
Spellbound 2
Tonight 1
Voyage of Truth 1
Abuse 1
My Super Star 1
Trying to Resist 1
Hopes 1
Grandpa's Wise Words 1
Stage Player 2
Hard Headed 2
A New You 1
Reckless Heart 0
These Walls 2
Spirits Plead 1
Without a Word 0
Too Little, Too Late 3
Unselfish Love 1
You Treat Me 2
Your Memory 1
Think About It 2
Enemy of Mine 1
You Leave me Paralyzed 1
Now You Need Me 1
LOVE HATE GAME 2
False Expectations 1
Inside looking out 0
Our Struggle 1
NEVER ENDING DISTRUCTION 1
Famished 2
Love's Freedom 1
A Fools Denial 1
Dark Pit 3
The Invitation 1
Chapters 2
BLUE 2
CRYING HEART 1
SILENCED 2
FIND YOUR WAY BACK 2
All I Desire 1
IN THE DARKNESS 4
MOURNING LOVE 5