You Were There
I heard you played the fiddle, though I never heard you play.You Were There
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for all my peops who miss connections they would have liked to make ...(c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com
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SavVySam commented on You Were There
05-02-2010
- Almost...is one of the saddest words, and you have drawn it's very image in this excellent piece! Nice work!
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05/03/2010
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Tempestlady commented on You Were There
04-30-2010
- Undiscovered connections exposed with such grace and beautiful insight and rhymes. As always glad I read...Write on...
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04/30/2010
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Springsize commented on You Were There
03-27-2010
- Very nice rhymes, easy flow mechanics, and the message is timeless, and an inspiration to stop and spend my moments communing with other people who so interest me... and study them, as if they are unusual flowers and giant redwood trees and I may learn from their leaves, etc... Nice Thoughts you have ...
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03/27/2010
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gogant commented on You Were There
03-24-2010
- You show us here, with this piece, Dancer, that one who hesitates is lost...................gentle words, from a gentle lady...................g
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03/25/2010
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dahlusion commented on You Were There
03-24-2010
- This is a superb write depicting the loss of a loved one. "our paths again won't meet, except, perhaps, in dreams and thoughts that live in this heart's beat" — deeply touching. Peace and Light, Dah
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03/25/2010
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