**YOU**

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    **YOU**

    Roses are red violets are blue this is the begining of the world for you* In your eye's I see a never ending truth, together me and you will bloom,in this world I'd like to call doom! We'll fill this room of spite,because us is such a delight,everything just feel's so right. Your love is as dark as night,but your face to me is so bright,the love you bring is the light, to guide me through this fight,and I know together we just might,clean my world that's full of fright!

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    Chicago commented on **YOU**

    04-27-2022

    i made a poem called 'YOU' in 2003....keep adding to it !

    AIXA commented on **YOU**

    03-22-2009

    Poema are fillings filled with love and passion

    ivecute77 commented on **YOU**

    12-01-2008

    well written, good poem

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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