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    You




    When you touch my skin I tremble.....by the heat that generates from your fingers

    You fill me with love and with such raw passion I can hardly breathe

    When I kiss your stomach my lips quiver at the smoothnes of your flesh......pulling me closer to all I know, to all I want...to all I taste

    The salty sweat drips from your brow and lands softly upon my lips...as you balance yourself above me, filling me up making me cry out with such a need to have all of you...for you never to stop...for every drop of life that you have to give.....I want to savour

    When I think of you, I stand cold in my tracks trying to remember what I was thinking of before you, before you....before you!




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    am2anangel commented on You

    12-26-2009

    beautiful and yet sensual piece. I enjoyed the write. Very vivid discriptiveness. Very well done.

    boomboom56 commented on You

    11-19-2009

    Such an erotic piece. The feelings of desire and lust were so powerful. It is almost like watching soft porn. Your words are sexy, yet clean. Loved it.

    fawndesno10 commented on You

    07-14-2009

    thts an awsome poem.....good job...you should check mine out.....

    dblair1229

    07/14/2009

    Wow......very very nice! You are sooo talented!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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