YOU

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    YOU
    You are a force of nature
    wildfire, heat and flames.
    Uncontroled passion
    you love with no shame.

    You are the call of the wild
    embracing wind, frost and cold.
    Controled dignity
    your spirit unsold.

    You are the eye of the tiger
    awareness, watching and alert.
    Controled stalking
    the hunter you flirt.

    You are the never ending story,
    eternitys child and joy.
    Uncontroled feelings
    the world is your toy.

    You are the candle in the night,
    sensitive heart and hands.
    Uncontroled love,
    you know where you stand...in my heart.

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    rollerderby commented on YOU

    12-24-2008

    May the holiday spiri be with you through o/ut the year. Great poem with a touch of adventure and passion ignited
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    drewking commented on YOU

    12-21-2008

    love this one!! good word.. write more poems.
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    Hathor4Wine commented on YOU

    12-20-2008

    hmmm...wonderfully spoken...just when you think some things go unseen...*smiles*
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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