You

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    You

     i thought i saw you and my heart skipped a beat
    but it wasnt you, it was my mind playing tricks on me
    mean, cruel condenscending tricks.
    My heart is broken, can you see?
    no you cant... youre too far away...
    Have you seen this girl?
    Her names Jessica and i love her.
    Have you seen these tears?
    These are what i cry for her.
    I love you jessica, wherever you are...

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    Mandi commented on You

    04-09-2013

    Well, God bless Jessica! She doesn't know what she is missing. That is all I have to say on that matter. Well, you have the sentiment for a lot of the drivel that it seems most pieces are made from. Hope I didn't offend you, I am just kidding. Bur it true most poems do represent affairs of the heart. And, I can be a bit of a romantic myself at times. Good start, actually.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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