Y.O.U

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    Y.O.U

    Baby how can I describe you
    When you almost put the “P” in perfect
    How could I turn my head or use my tongue to disguise my knowledge and deny you
    How do you use your power
    To overtake me and leave me hooked to your every action
    How can my story of you begin
    When there’s too many beginnings to make the introduction pure satisfaction

    Where does your love and dedication come from
    Your brains, your patience, your shape come from
    You evolved into a handsomely depicted creature
    A beautifully interesting believer

    In the things I say and do
    I’m always concerned with the thoughts of you
    I’m deeply in love with your soul
    Can’t seem to take my mind off it
    Though I have many, you’re consistently my most important and highly prized goal

    No matter how big the red octagon sign
    My love can’t be stopped by it
    Its eight sides can’t compromise for how straight my angles
    And ninety degrees, parallels itself
    With your wants and your needs

    To a certain degree I can vertically be at my knees
    Or lay on my back at a horizontal plane
    I yearn for pain and to scream your name
    You can keep my body tingling for hours on end
    And even when you stop, I’d rather you begin again
    So it all adds up to how amazing you are
    And the magical things you can do
    I’m proud and astounded that we’ve come this far
    There’s no one so gifted and who has all of your talents to qualify for the
    “Y” in Y.O.U

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    muttman1 commented on Y.O.U

    01-27-2009

    that was very beautiful

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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