you

 INTRO
they always say to me,
"if you love somthing let it go,
if it returns to you it is yours,
if it doesn't it never was"
let you go?
for quite some time i have said no.
i couldnt fathom the thought,
you being someone elses,
but now i know better....

   POEM

i let you go,
my heart and mind close in tow,
i understand now that this is what i must do,
until you have a clue,
of the things that you want,
and the things taht you need,
and though quietly inside,
i shall painfully bleed,
you must discover for yourself,
what you truly want,
it is not somthing for which,
i can reach in and hunt.

i know that deep down,
i am still yours,
and i wish you to know,
as i approach your shores...
your body is a temple,
my sacred shrine,
to me it is truly somthing special,
so beautiful,
so delecate,
so whole,
and divine.

your love is somthing special,
somthing you still hold true for me,
and my heart is my vessel,
and i have pledged it to thee.

i respect you in every possible way,
i want you to know,
that i am here to stay.

this distance is nothing,
compared to my love for you,
you could double the distance,
and split my love in two,
and still yet it wont anywhere near dent,
my feelings for you.

no galaxy is to far,
no sun is to hot,
no mountain to high,
hell did you know,
that my love can fly?
no forest to dark,
no light is to bright,
to keep my feelings for you,
forever in sight.
no ocean to deep,
or hill to steep,
to keep my heart and my mind,
from finding you,
wherever you may sleep.

i will travel the distance of the world,
and 3 or 4 more,
to show that my heart and my love is yours,
forever and more.

in death i will watch you,
forever above,
for even death itself can not touch,
my undying love. <3

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Shelbylolann commented on you

10-09-2012

I loved this Jacob!!!! So beautiful Thank you for writing it for me(: AHHHH You are such a good writer and I love how cute you make me all girlie and gross lol --Shelby.. PS 10!

Pocahantas commented on you

10-08-2012

I absolutely loved the third stanza of the poem! Great write!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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