you

You are as pretty as the sun, the moon and heaven by far,
when i stare at ur beauty I am reminded of a star.
To look at you and notice i'm surrounded by love,
as i look to the sky and see clouds shaped like a dove.
Your words are quite pure and ur heart is true,
each poem i write reminds me of you.
To know you is godlike, to see you is right,
i hold you close to me all through the night.
Sometimes it's hard to know just what to say,
because i always think of u each day.

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litldeer commented on you

08-03-2009

Very sweet and pure emotion. You write about love perfectly. Your feelings are strong. Your rhyming is always excellent. Another then from me. Write on!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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