You'll never change

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    You'll never change

    Your better than all of this,
    I know you can move on from this,
    Think back and remember the good
     
    Dont forgive me because you think you should,
    I'll always love you and what we had,
    It hurts me bad to know your so sad,
    Tomorrows a new day

     Don't let the good get away,
    Let your beauty shine through,
    Theres not much more that i can do,
    the rest is up to you,
    Unless you love yourself,
    you'll never change

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    california commented on You'll never change

    08-01-2009

    Very nice, I like your writing style. Sort of a free style mix.

    Tempestlady commented on You'll never change

    07-31-2009

    Maybe you wont shine through? Nice write. Very inspirational wih good rhythm. Write on....

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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