Young lovers

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Young lovers







They frolicked in the meadow
carefree, wild and true,
dancing in each others love
under a sky of blue.

Giggling in awe of what they
have found,
falling into rapture
as they tumble to the ground.

As they lay upon their bed of flowers,
soaking in the sun,
he leans in and whispers,
You're the only one.

Giggling again, she rolls
from his grasp,
and runs a ways teasingly
and he begins to laugh.

Running up to catch her
he pulls her close and then,
holds her in his arms and kisses
her
so she'll never run again.

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Shan commented on Young lovers

08-07-2009

A romantic poem..... I loved to read this piece.... It inspires me to write more on this topic of love and romance...... The flow is good.... the style is sweet...... keep up poetry.....

laydbak1 commented on Young lovers

07-14-2009

I just love reading where the flow never gets bogged down and the message is blended so easily and clearly... I wrote a poem about this same subject years ago... It's not posted, but the picture you used and the moments these two shared, were very similar.... great piece of work.... 10 10 10

Dancer022597 commented on Young lovers

07-06-2009

I really liked this poem. I thought it was very light and flowy. You've described a realationship that most couples dream of having.

BlackKnightOS commented on Young lovers

06-12-2009

I like this poem, it gets me to think of my girlfriend and the fun we have spending time together. This is a well written poem, Mrs. Poet. :o)

soulwriter commented on Young lovers

06-06-2009

I love the simplicity of innocence playfully displayed here. Oh, those days of being young are a few years past, but young love last and last.... Keep creating - well done.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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This is a love story 2
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Beyond~ 0
Tears~ 2
Beyond what you see 0
Deeper waters 1
Rambles 0
The mountains are calling ~ 1
She sang~ 0
tic toc 0
Uncut chains 0
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My Garden 1
kick 1
Repentance 0
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untitled 0
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Yet 6
Another fight 9
Vanities Crime 9
Lost innocence 5
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Baptism 19
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behind these tears 5
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A daughters grief 6
echoes of goodbye 7
Heartaches cry 6
To love myself at last 8
Set free 3
Unfit love 5
A feather fell from heaven 4
Goodbye 105
on the wings of a dove 1
Drifting 5
The kiss 5
Flawless wings 4
night come softly 1
forest song 2
mystery's plan 6
Young lovers 10
Black Roses 9
Expectant heart 5
His Face 1
Her need. 2
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On my knees 6
My gift 6
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Wilted flower 6
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Under his wings 3
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A symphony of praise 3
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