Young solider
Young solider,it is time to grab your gun,
for now we are done,
with the years of fun,
now you must set off,
with the rising sun,
be prepared,
for the blood and gore to come,
for young man,
it is time for you,
to head off to war.
Young solider
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Poem Commentary
i dunno, just felt like writing this lolit is time to grab your gun,
for now we are done,
with the years of fun,
now you must set off,
with the rising sun,
be prepared,
for the blood and gore to come,
for young man,
it is time for you,
to head off to war.
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Shelbylolann commented on Young solider
11-30-2011
- Great write babe... I enjoied it... Im glad you talked to my mom and decided to stay here for me and.. US.... Well. . . 10 here. Love you(:
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starfire316 commented on Young solider
11-30-2011
- This is a great poem it reminds me of my ex boyfriend before he went he wasnt doing the best of things though. if you want you can read my poems too.
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