Your Eyes

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    • blaquegoddess
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    Your Eyes

    When I look deep into your eyes
    your soul shares this beautiful story
    of love, hurt, deceit, and lies,
    when I look deep into your eyes
    your heart begins to swell
    you break into a cold sweat
    as your pulse begin to rise,
    when I look deep into your eyes
    your breathing becomes heavy and deep
    is it because your emotions are lost
    or the fear I may see you weep,
    when I look deep into your eyes
    your hands begin to shake
    is it because your body is feeling awake,
    when I look into your eyes
    your legs begin to move
    because your are one step closer to getting
    in the groove,
    when I looked into your eyes
    I saw something you didn't want me to see,
    you making passionate love to a woman, and
    that woman happens to be me

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    squadbuddy954 commented on Your Eyes

    12-29-2009

    This poem was very creative your style is amazing keep writing because I will keep reading

    LadyL714 commented on Your Eyes

    03-20-2009

    Very nicely done.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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