Your Friendship

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  • Friendship

    Your Friendship
    Your love runs deep
    Deep into your veins
    This love you show
    How can I show you?
    You want me to love you
    But I have love for you
    But I am not in love with you
    You want to feel my comfort
    You want to feel my warmth
    Now I want to feel just you
    You want so much from me
    But I can’t give you all
    All I can give is friendship
    You are a dear friend to me
    You feel so much for me
    You feel this and will feel more
    You feel so much for me
    You want me to feel so much for you
    All I know is friendship is great
    Since you have been in my life
    I do feel happy with the time we spend
    You want me to be in love
    But all I can say now
    I can tell you this much
    You are in my heart
    I do think about you often
    You will feel a lot from me
    You will even feel love
    It might not be what you want
    But this is what I can give
    All I know is this one thing
    And all I can say to you now
    Is thank you so much
    For everything you done and said
    But thank you most of all for
    Your Friendship

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    stellar commented on Your Friendship

    06-14-2010

    the flow is great...smooth...you make the conflict here smooth...I really understand...great poem! ^_^ v
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    rossmangeles commented on Your Friendship

    06-29-2009

    People come and go and only few will stay...friends. Love and friendship are indeed special feelings of affection expressed in different ways. I love the frankness of your words being spoken to a very special friend.
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    poetry2069 commented on Your Friendship

    05-30-2009

    I really liked your poem. It was real and heartfelt. Thank you so much for sharing it! The words flowed nicely in your poem!
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    soulwriter commented on Your Friendship

    05-26-2009

    How poetically conveyed,, words spoken to flow down the page as all the emotions pour forth, as your heart spoke the pen or keys moved and now the reader is left to experience - some of us are left to translate a love for which we truly relate. Write on write on!
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    sherry122 commented on Your Friendship

    04-27-2009

    It doesn’t sound like a poem at all, more like a letter you wrote to your friend. It has a nice content but it’s not poetic. U should be working on your creativity with words in my opinion or if you had some rhimes in it, it would have been a poem for me.
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