Your Life

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    My friend and her bf are fighting and he is about to break up with her and she is saying that her life is ruined now. and its not. she can live without him. and she is gonna argue with me and say that she can't. but she will realize that i was right all along.

    Your Life

     You say you love him,
    You let him walk all over you
    You want him to be with you
    He was for a short period of time
    But he is stupid
    So he broke your heart
    Now you say that its the end of your life
    That your life is ruined
    Step back
    look around
    He can't control you
    You're your own person
    He doesn't own you
    You can let go
    Move on
    There are more people
    Caring and loving
    That will make you feel better than he ever did
    So trust me
    This is Your Life
    Not his. 

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    jessicanichole8 commented on Your Life

    11-16-2010

    but my life is ruined!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he is all that i want i dont want another guy i just want him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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    babygirl4028

    11/16/2010

    u can find better. i know u can. and it isn't ruined. no matter wat u say it isn't ruined.

    jessicanichole8

    11/16/2010

    i dont think i can get better just look at me i am ugly and fat

    babygirl4028

    11/17/2010

    no ur not jessica, i can't tell u that enough. you need to listen to me!!!

    jessicanichole8

    11/17/2010

    but is the truth

    Jordan98

    11/17/2010

    jess u have it better than i did so i know that u will do better and who cares about codie? ur not fat and ur not ugly and u will get another bf i promise

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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