Your Path

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    Your Path
    The wind blows against your skin
    The morning sun warms the sand
    A bird glides across the sky
    That covers this land

    Can you feel his glory
    Can you see the light
    Shining upon your soul
    Never blinding your sight

    The words are written
    The message is clear
    Believe in more than yourself
    And your path will appear

    No two are the same
    All are of different length
    They have one thing in common
    To walk them requires great strength

    Find the good
    That exists in us all
    Walk through life holding his hand
    And never will you fall

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    StandingBear commented on Your Path

    11-27-2009

    Another genre from within the deep cerebral topics you write of. The mind is open and the pen is at hand. Great write!
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    Artie

    11/27/2009

    Thx- Glad you enjoyed it

    Chaos128 commented on Your Path

    11-07-2009

    Your chameleon is showing, Artie. "Your Path" is less edgy than the your customary compositions; Almost if you were talking to a child instead of an adult. Ha! I guess that would make sense, wouldn't it?
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    Artie

    11/14/2009

    Thx - great observation, and you hit the nail on the head

    knight4696 commented on Your Path

    09-30-2009

    Artie - This is definately written in a different vein for you. I really enjoyed it. I find this topic harder to write about then the darker side - but you've inspired me to give it a try. Afterall - it was your poem "Overcome" that inspired me to write my "In A Blink Of An Eye". Nice Work Artie!
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    Juliez commented on Your Path

    08-20-2009

    Spiritually upllifting. "Shining upon your soul - Never blinding your sight"
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    jferclark commented on Your Path

    08-16-2009

    Beautiful... shows your versatility.... (is that the right word?) Reminds me of some of my own.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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