your smile

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    your smile

    Your smile the way you look at me gives me chill's cause your love for mw shows the warmth from your arms when there around me makes me feel safe when you grab me hand and kiss me the way you do makes my heart melt and joke with joy and staring into your eyes gives me butterflies it's like i fall in love with you all over again

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    Mangus commented on your smile

    08-04-2010

    I enjoyed the word usage in this piece. Gave a clear message. I enjoyed how you had fun with a sometimes serious topic

    trulynlove22 commented on your smile

    08-03-2010

    lol thank you hun

    Chaos128 commented on your smile

    08-03-2010

    Ha ha That's funny...that's just what all the girls say to me... I'm only joking... kinda... A really cool warm and fuzzy love poem. Good work!

    trulynlove22 commented on your smile

    08-03-2010

    lol ya i thought so to lol

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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