these pale moon slivers crave red love
these open wounds reside in
these scars of treason
each moment a melody of confusion

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Olan01 commented on youth


I like this reflection in words. You write an interesting poem. Dwell in love, peace and freedom, Olan.

dahlusion commented on youth


This is so beautifully surreal, passionate, and revealing. Gorgeous imagery! Bravo!!

mustascheman commented on youth


It's funny because with a title like that you could have gotten away with just the last line and it still would have made perfect sence! Cool.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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