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05-02-2010 at 05:30:45 PM

Student Discussions

05-02-2010 at 08:12:00 PM

RE: Student Discussions

Hey thanx John for creating a smoother landing strip. It is wonderful to float into the new zone and find what you're looking for without leaping over fences and walking around tall buildings. Here is a poem for the occasion.

Thanks So Much

For the informative look
into my minds wandering play.

I was forced to rewrite
the unknown letter
after your eyes had touched
upon its words so delicately.

It must be that your subliminal,
distant visions had reached into
my mind and change it.

I don't know why I didn't think
of it before, changing that word
from "book" to "handbook;"
it makes such a distinct disparity.

It was so clever of you
to send me such a cosmic message.

Thank you, ever so much,
for the gift of amazement.

I do hope that you will enjoy
some sunshine yourself
this fine afternoon.

Good-day, and do, please,
be quite merry. Cheerio!


© RH Peat 5/1/2010 4:50pm
form: 8 stanzas/ 22 lines: epistle like
shared spiritual cognizance


a poet friend
RH Peat

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05-04-2010 at 12:26:21 AM

RE: Student Discussions



Well, thank you WordSlinger for providing this quaint little corner where the students may pass notes or post them...

And Welcome to Madelynn, our newest student to the classes... smile

WhereEver has Forestbird taken her poems ???

And who was the mysterious poster with the blue whirl hat?

Off to the critiques all ~
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05-04-2010 at 12:44:37 AM

RE: Student Discussions

Oops! Like whose Madelynn, the newest student I only saw one post for Forestbird and the mysterious blue whirl hat is totally unknown to me as well? They need to post an intro on the class page to get started, so I can put them on roll call.

a poet friend
RH Peat

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.