" War Remembered" by B.Gillap

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    This poem was made by my B.G. when he was 11 years old. He dedicated this to his grandpa...

    " War Remembered" by B.Gillap

    As we hear the guns shot,

    And the whistles blowing,

    That’s how you remember people fighting for us.

     

    As the cannons are shot,

    And the people are screaming,

    That’s how I remember people fighting for us.

     

    As the leaders yell charge,

    And the people are hiding and diving for cover,

    That’s how my family remembers people fighting for us.

     

    As we see the soldiers charging,

    And see the soldiers dying,

    That’s how we all remember people fighting for us.

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    StandingBear commented on " War Remembered" by B.Gillap

    02-18-2010

    A fascinating work from your B.G. when he was 11 years old. Great dedication write for grandpa!

    RymaHouri

    02/18/2010

    thanks....:)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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