A Present For You

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    A Present For You
    I've got you something its a present for you, This present is worth alot but has no value. It dont cost a dime but it is extaorinary, It is something you will charish and always carry. Because even though it dont have value its extravagant, It is a present for you i will be glad to give. If you want to know what it is you should have known from the start, This gift or present i give to you girl is MY HEART....

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    cottonluv commented on A Present For You

    03-13-2009

    short and sweet.good work
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    BrielleC commented on A Present For You

    03-12-2009

    This is nice...I do believe it could be expanded upon though. Also check your spelling, typos kinda stick out like a sore thumb especially when you're right in the flow of the piece, it interrupts the feel and mood when I see a typo
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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