A road full of tears

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    A road full of tears

    A road filled with tears.
    Is a lonely road.
    It is the touch of a cold hand.
    Before your friend hits that long road.
    Two paths have been taken.
    One wrong and one right.
    No one knows he danced with the devil that night.
    Now his kids must suffur without there dad.
    It isn't my place to decide his fate.
    I just hope I don't make the same mistake.
    Its not fair that his wife moved on so quick.
    It was only a week.
    Now ain't that some sh*t.
    She must like the drama of it all.
    Cause they have the same job.
    Ball till you fall.
    I am sick from the pain I feel.
    Why did you have to die to prove you were real.
    I wish there was a happy ending to all of this.
    But this is the end an thats all there is.

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    DirtyLilSecret commented on A road full of tears

    06-02-2009

    This is a poem that i understand and makes sense to me.. You have done a wonderful job writing about this and conveying your emotions!! Keep writing like this!

    jonerik1984

    06/03/2009

    thank you so much you might like the wrong choice too i just wrote it tonight. let me know what you think :)

    danbi commented on A road full of tears

    06-02-2009

    "their dad" I feel like this piece has potential, especially the line "Why did you have to die to prove you were real." I think you need to be a little more concious of your punctuation, and creating concrete images. Otherwise a good start. Keep at it.

    jonerik1984

    06/02/2009

    thanks so much :)my punctuation is my big down fall lol

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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