Acrostic

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This is an acrostic I came up with a couple of winters ago when I was feeling disillusioned with life in general. I hope that you can see what it's actually saying (hint: it's not actually about sledding). It no longer applies, but I still wanted to share the poem

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Today, he is sledding iced streets. A city's rain yet freezes on roads here; every lad's pastime

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Lind commented on Acrostic

05-21-2018

Well-written (I did get it but I'm not saying what it is bc I think other readers need to figure out out too). I love the cleverness behind it.

SeedPlanter

05/26/2018

Great, I'm glad you understood it. Thank you so much for your feedback

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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