Addicted To Love

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    Addicted To Love

    I am Addicted to the love i and is stuck in the maze. I dont know how to get out because I live you,breath you,love you, and cant live without you. This maze that i put myself into has to many doors to it that someway lead to your heart. But the thing is, im not sure i want to go down the right one. I love you and wouldnt be who I am wothout you. But in this maze, I found another person is winning your heart. If I could I would like to find a short cut,that way I would win our heart. I want to be with you and share the rest of my life with you. But while I am busy thinking of you somone else is to. I hate this maze that I am in because it has to many ups and downs to it. I know you love me,you show it in every way you can but there is a block in this maze that is standin between our love that we share. The addiction that I have for you will never go away. You dont have to admit but you are in a maze to,for my heart. And in everyway I will help you reach it first. Your addicted to me just like i am addicted to you. And when we reach the end theres no breakin us up. When this block leaves, I know you will be waiting for me at the finish line beacause no one cares about you,the way to i do.

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    Alexia commented on Addicted To Love

    06-23-2009

    i found this alittle on the difficult side to read. I don't think it flows very well. You should re read it a couple of times and see if you can edit it a little more i think that would make it better

    cryptic77 commented on Addicted To Love

    05-20-2009

    I think thatyoiu should take time to think about what you really want to say. You talked from somewhere not your heart and if she is there, she is only there because he wants.. her.. to be there. Write about that.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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