AFFECTION VS LUST

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    AFFECTION VS LUST

    AFFECTION VS LUST .

    yu [ have ] MORE then crossed my m ii n d,
    - appears to me as iff yu [RESIDE]
    on my inside .
    *HOWEVER; i Desire a b e t t e r time ,
    OR (place) , wherever .
    H-E-S-I-T-A-T-I-O-N . please excuse my presentation.
    -` iCant live LIFE without e x c l a ii m a t ii o n !!
    [possibly] itsz time for RESPIRATION. innnnnnnnnnn
    * breathe outtttttttttt . mayby iShould
    TAKE A BREAK
    so my eqo can restrain
    - without buildinq mistakes

    Siqned, PoeticallyChallenqed. v

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    Knwldge commented on AFFECTION VS LUST

    03-13-2010

    aye yo this is a quick way to get it off ur chest, i like it plus the way u wrote it u got mad imagination, shit is hott keep it moving, u got anymore?
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    BLASTHEME commented on AFFECTION VS LUST

    05-30-2009

    I enjoyed reading this, because, even in its surface simplicity, there is the deepness of pure creativity, that might be missed if one blinks(lol...smile) This reminds me of how I have actually created and recited off the top of the head in a freestyled moment for someone face to face, and it was very refreshing to see and comprehend everything that you wfrote in here, all the way to the h..e..s..i..t..a..t..i..o..n..s.....for addittional effect Great write 10+ Please feel free to come by a
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    Niecy commented on AFFECTION VS LUST

    03-07-2009

    Very Creative write & flow! Can't live without......... e x c l a ii m a t ii o n!! I Love it!
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    xdavidabramx commented on AFFECTION VS LUST

    03-07-2009

    Hey, I really like this poem, by the way, thanks for adding me!
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    SusanLee commented on AFFECTION VS LUST

    03-06-2009

    reading this as I believe you meant it I really like it. It has another rhythym. write some more.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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