Agony of Adam

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  • Regret

    Agony of Adam

     Mind racing
    Mind stop
    Heartbeat, Heartbeat
    Sweating, Sweating

    Cold come
    Cold stop
    Heartbeat, Heartbeat
    Sweating, Sweating

    Urge return
    Urge stop
    Heartbeat, Heartbeat
    Sweating, Sweating

    Life living
    Life stop
    Heartbeat, Heartbeat
    Sweating, Sweating

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    sammia commented on Agony of Adam

    02-17-2010

    nice write.. loved the flow... keep writing and sharing
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    Madelli commented on Agony of Adam

    02-17-2010

    Babe? What the? Sounds intense...so tell me what it means
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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