Alone in my universe

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    • peacesmoker
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    Alone in my universe

    Alone my soul, 
    alone I am, 
    alone forever how sad I am, 
    alone I sit, 
    alone I cry, 
    wondering while time is the only thing on my side, 
    alone I eat, 
    alone I walk, 
    to nobody I talk, 
    I guess its my fault,
    as I sit by my self,
    my mind is blank,
    my spirit is drained, 
    I can't even thank, 
    how could this be,
    a good person like me,
    is stuck in a room,
    with no one to see,
    and nowhere to be, 
    this cant be destiny,
    I thank its a curse, 
    because nothing is worst,
    than me being alone in my own universe.
     
     

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    strawberryskiss commented on Alone in my universe

    08-18-2011

    Love this one as well. It's a horrible feeling 2 be lonely,but it's better than being with the wrong person though. Again, keep writing.

    photochick commented on Alone in my universe

    07-21-2009

    great write very deep but don't worry no one is every alone forever that's what you have great friends for so you don't eat alone or walk alone great poem i am sure many of us have felt this way at one time or another

    peacesmoker

    08/27/2009

    thank ya sexy baby nice to know i have a friend like you.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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