Among My Stars

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  • Dark Poetry
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  • Reflection
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  • Strength
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  • Loneliness
    • Darkrank
    • is on the verge of a relapse, sinking deeper into the solace of mine heart.

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    This I had created while posting an image by the same name on another website. I liked the poem so much that I added it as another entry on the same site. I'm adding it here as a starting piece into my OriginalPoetry account. Please give some feed back.

    I'm a freeverser, so if you dislike things that have no rhyme, you'll not like my stuff too much.

    Among My Stars

     Among my stars
    The beauty rests
    Planets of red
    fogs of colors vivid

    Among my stars
    Is where she sleeps
    Her beauty is which I love
    Her existence as mine

    Among my stars
    I sleep forever
    I command their light
    for I fear my darkness

    Among my stars
    My pretty little stars
    There is nothing that can harm me
    But everything to lose

    Among my stars
    They're not my stars
    at least... Not anymore
    They're now Our stars

    Among Our stars
    Our children will play
    Our Souls will play with them
    As eternity flows on

    Among Our stars...

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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