And she wrote

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    And she wrote
    A child was born
    A child of torture
    Of hate
    Of pain
    Of past mistakes

    A girl was found
    She could not cry
    She could not talk
    Her legs were scrunched
    Her eyes were dead
    But held the pain
    She was made from past mistakes

    A life was saved
    Today’s the day
    The girl they found
    She could not walk
    She was put into
    A nice cozy home
    And in her room
    She wrote and wrote

    This poem you read
    Was written by she
    It’s choppy and sloppy
    But at least she can see
    She’s no longer a past mistake

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    Tempestlady commented on And she wrote

    07-09-2009

    Wow! This is really good. Congratulations, glad you made it through. Not sloppy not choppy just a rosebud, yet to bloom. It's ok to write in your room. God doesn't make mistakes, good write.
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    Kagegetsuoni

    07/09/2009

    :) thank you very much!

    Richisfun commented on And she wrote

    06-09-2009

    Very Good ! i like yr style of writing , life is an enigma, so when we write with mistery it is more interesting , like when some people speak and thier not interesting its boring, keep up the good work--rich
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    Kagegetsuoni

    06/25/2009

    Wow thank you, i'll try and post more :)

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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