Angelic face by amber

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Angelic face by amber

I walk in the room and see peoples faces happy as can be people start talk to me but the only thing i can i see is your Angelic face my hart beats at a million miles per hour,Oh how i cant see your face for a little bit like maybe 3 or 4 weeks.But the  pain inside is beating on me like a African drum,harder and harder till my eyes of seeing you starts to fad away.

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Daypup5 commented on Angelic face by amber

03-27-2011

hahah i am soooo good at writeing :3 TO THE HACKER STOP GOING ON MY FREINDS ACCOUNT please

girlygirl1234 commented on Angelic face by amber

02-22-2011

i like it alot...haha and i will be jealous but anyways i give you a 10.......GG

brandice commented on Angelic face by amber

01-08-2011

i love it so much great job amber .........

KING commented on Angelic face by amber

01-08-2011

It hurts to see the ones we want, but often cannot have.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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