Arctic Cold

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    I spent 10 years in Canada, and this pretty much tells part of my first winter in the great, frozen far north. It was so beautiful, I had trouble breathing as I watched in awe.

    Arctic Cold

    I stood in the nearly silent hush
    of The Arctic cold's white light,
    hearing ice crystals tinkle softly
    as they filtered through the night.

    Newcomer that I was, at 50 below,
    no scarf sheltered bejewled ears,
    nor warm air to lung, I watched in awe
    the bitter whiteness winter brings.

    I watched the splender of Northern Lights
    dancing across the starlit sky.
    Soft colors blend, fingers move,
    rays and drapes, glow then softly die.

    In panic, I heard loud cannon blast
    when tree hearts burst and die
    from frozen sap expanding cold -
    in pain, they seemed to cry.

    On snowshoes, I trod across the snow's
    frozen crust - desperately - wanting
    to sample everything in this new
                         land, strange, cold and daunting.

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    Artistpoet commented on Arctic Cold

    09-26-2009

    Great insight of places untrodden. I like your descriptions of the climate otherwise not noticed or realized..

    winterdawn

    09/26/2009

    thank you. I enjoy writing about nature and people I have known.

    Lolee commented on Arctic Cold

    09-17-2009

    You made me feel as if I were there. I can see the desolate white acres with cold wisps of white shifting with the wind. I'll bet it was awesome in the moonlight...glittering...with a electric blue hew. I am looking forward to more poems from you : )

    Lolee

    09/22/2009

    Yes, I got your comment.(smiling)

    winterdawn

    09/17/2009

    Lolee, I do not know if my answer got to you - my puter is acting up -so if it didn't, thank you very much. I miss the north at times dot s

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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