As Beautiful

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this was actually written by my amazing boyfriend, as often as I find him to be my inspiration, it seems, I manage to become his as well. :)

As Beautiful

As beautiful as a butterfly,
    As gentle as the rain.
    A soothing flood of water to ease away the pain.
A lovely monarch's laughter, ripping through the dark
vibrating the pieces of a shattered crystal heart.
   So long I have been walking, stepping, blind eyed
take another unexpected step onto the wings of a butterfly.
As the colors explode around you, and the beauty to behold.
Just to see it one more time you'd give a kings ransoming in gold.
   The beautiful world that is her eyes I'd walk forever in
and softly pray to the gods that this should never end,
for the chance to hold an angel, I have one life to give
but once upon a time is just not enough to give.
  So I write this to a butterfly as I begin to cry,
and tell you that I'll love you...until the day I die.

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Rhymer commented on As Beautiful

06-25-2010

This poem, while sad, is beautiful at the same time. They usually are when they come from the heart. 10

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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