AS ONE

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AS ONE

If I could hold you all through the night I would hold you until morning light.
To feel your skin up against mine it's like silk or satin when our bodies intertwin.
When you talk you speak with words so bold I can feel the warmth all though my soul.
I hold you forever and a day in my heart to really pray we never grow apart.
As god loves us we shall love one another for those are the words we will speak to each other.
To hold my heart in the palm of your hand I say I love you time and time again.
And let it be known there is no other for he found me and I found him.
Together our future will never be dim.
We'll laugh, we'll cry, we'll sing, we'll sigh, but we'll never cause pain inside .
We honor we respect our love is no less.
And when it's time to gather round it's because the king and queen finally wear their crown.

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cliftondurant commented on AS ONE

08-21-2009

BG this is a great poem I love it a wonderful love story remind me of a poem i wrote the beauty of love you should read it thankjs for sharing

lucky62 commented on AS ONE

08-21-2009

Try to hold you down and keep you in the kitchen barefoot. I think not. Find your powerful self amidst all this hell and pain for together you both shall rein....... love long and hard bg look to yourself for the answers............ loved this one

rougepriest commented on AS ONE

08-21-2009

very pretty prose i suppose nice rythme too its good without being too gushy wich i appreciate nice job bg26

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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