Because of you

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    Because of you

    My mind is so cloudy because of you,
    i feel like i am a failure and what should i do,
    Ashamed of the way my life has turned,
    watching as everthing around me has burned.

    My soul is so dark and i am not the same,
    starring at my reflection but who is to blame,
    So confused about where i should begin,
    oh god forgive me for commiting this sin.

    My heart is shattered and it feels like this is the end,
    someone tell me how long will it take to mend,
    Everyday i try to hold my head up so high,
    but the weight gets heavier as the days go by,

    My body is weak and i feel like i'm insane,
    sometimes it is so hard to maintain,
    I know sooner or later this storm will be yet in my past,
    but the question i have is how long will it last,

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    ArizonaPlay commented on Because of you

    02-08-2009

    i dunno who rated this so low, but i think is true raw emotions

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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