because of you

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    because of you

    I sit alone along the lake
    to watch the sun descend,
    I used to sit and think
    of how my life might end.
    I once longed for the icy touch
    of the Blade across my skin,
    And I knew the line I
    walked was very, very thin,
    My parents didn’t listen
    they barely even heard
    Of the pain that I was going
    through they said I was absurd.
    I viewed my life as glass;
    Glass that had been shattered
    and then was soaked with gas.
    As my life got worse
    I saw the gas ignite
    I turned away in pain as the
    flames they grew so bright.
    I tried to douse the fire
    and clean up all the mess,
    But my hands got burned and
    bloodied and added to the mess.
    Through the burned and broken
    pieces I tried to sort them through,
    And I realized this all started
    when I fell in love you.

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    DavidRayy commented on because of you

    11-03-2009

    wow!! nicely written, great flow like a stedy drum roll just carried me through!!!

    spbsdude commented on because of you

    10-15-2009

    Love can be painful, especially if it is of the forbidden variety. Very expressive and heartfelt. Nice job.

    Grito commented on because of you

    03-22-2009

    Love as pain, but God turns into sunshine, all that was once rain.

    Drivingczar commented on because of you

    03-21-2009

    There is no better therapy than your inner strength to share with us strangers that care!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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